Hey Christina, it's Melanie, I read the comments you wrote on my poems and thanks for taking the time to write them. You know that all you have to do is turn back to God and commit yourself fully to him. I have made mistakes in the past, but there is nothing you can do that God won't forgive. I know that it can be hard sometimes but God will never leave your side. Thanks again and i hope the best for you. Just have faith. "Faith is being sure of what you hope for, and certain of what you cannot see." (Hebrews 11:1)

I liked this... my only advice is maybe you should... not write it in paragraph form... to make it more poetic, and to give it a sense of flow. anyways nice write -Jen-

Ok first of all thank you for adding me to your favorites....wow you are very talented and that is amazing for you to put down your apologies on paper like that and your emotions down into words. i love your poems and i love how you write keep me posted thanks again for adding me

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

laura

Very nice poem. I loved the flow and concept of it. Great Job.

Very nice poem. I loved the flow and concept of it. Great Job.

It's a really good poem. Although, if you put the poem in stanzas, it would look better. Great poem. 5/5

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