by xXx Expecting xXx May 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Are you happy now |
by +Fouillis+
Thats really great! I loved it. Well written and soulful. Good rhythm. It would be great if you could comment some of my poems too. It would mean a lot. Thanks. xo |
by Pauly D.
Loved it, Very sad and I can relate. |
Thanks for the comment on my poem glad someone enjoyed it. Beautifully written by the way keep up the good worK! =) |
Lovely poem! ireally lykd it! 5/5 |
by oldthings
Awesome poem, i love the flow and the repeat of the lines makes it really get the emotions across, it felt so strong that i started feeling guilty for nothing! lol. it's a greet poem, good job. |