My tongue cries out
God, I'm all alone
point me to humanity
I need someone to hold
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LOVED this. Those lines really captured me :/ Hm. I loved it though. Flow was good, And the meaning behind it. I can relate a little too. So overall, It was awesome. 5/5

`taleee xx

Emotional write... Very well written. Loved it!

Outstanding ending! I enjoyed the whole piece, but the last stanza just blew me away...awesome!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Hey, this is great...i know what you mean by this..absolutely amazing..leaves me speechless..keep it up and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy