by becki May 25, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
It used to be better.. we went on holiday with each other. the wind in our hair and the sand at our feet. we used to cuddle up close near to each other's heart. but it all changed from when we got back from that holiday...he started to like another girl.. he told me before that he hated her and wanted nothing to do with her. i believed him. but i shouldn't have. she started flirting with him and acting like they were just friends. but nearly every night.. he came back late.. i asked him where he had been. he *LIED* to me. it turns out.. that she didn't know that we were together.. it wasn't *HER* fault......it was *HIS* |
by hazzi
Luv yah poem hunni keep up the gud work!! remember to keep reading mine lolz ill write the one about humphrey now lolz!! |
by Fixxxer
It's more difficult to arrange stressed/unstressed syllables if your using too many small words... cutting them out can make the flow better.. but if your very careful with your wording you don't have to omit a lot. |
by paddy
Hey beckie, |