Wow...

Nice poem very good love the rhyme keep up the good work

Oh my god baby this is beautiful, i thought everything was going well?!?!?!

Talk soon
I Love Yu
Xx-me-xX

Nicely done. Just a few minor things to correct... "there place" should be "their place"... "their actually doing" and "their causing" should be "they're actually doing" and "they're causing"... "trusing" should be "trusting". Sorry, don't mean to seem like picking apart your poem. Good write otherwise.