by Jordan
Holy crap, I love it! It's just my style. The word "haunting" in the seventh line says it all. Truly magnificent Kim, bravo. :) |
by Simon Hayes
Wow... Dark and mysterious. Wonderfully written. Quite haunting. As said above "haunting" on the 7th line brings out the darkness of this poem. |
I'm just wondering, bt did u enter this 4 a contest? lol, anyway gr8 work i loved this poem, it had a lot of details |
by Lovely Bones
Wow this is marvelous. Simply Breathtaking. I'm at a loss of words for this one. I loved it!! |
by Megann Lee
I like this poem. It was very well written. |
by Timothy r
Iloved this poem so much, welcome to my favorites list. Timothy r |
by Jessica
Wow, that is so powerful and so intense! i loved it.. the descriptions were brilliant.. wow.. i really loved that! its metaphoric in a way, but just a truly excellent poem! the imagery was great, it flowed well, and your use of language worked reallly well! 5/5 p.s. thanks for the comment, i agree that she shouldn't have been in that section lol.. xox! |
by Natalie
Very nice poem. I really liked your word choice in this. It gave it abit more strength to the poem. Awesome job =) 5/5 |
by Dark Demise
Omg! this is incredible 5/5! great poem! |