by Raychil May 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She had everything a girl ever wanted |
This is great! I love it! Good job and very very very sad poem darling! |
by MemoirsOfMe
Oh wow. This was very sad. I loved how it flowed, and the Personification was amazing. Great Job, I really liked this one because it might be happening in our world today. You are an excellent story teller! |
Gr8 poem loved it..very deep. loved the rhymes and flow..thnx 4 the comment:) |
5/5...amazing poem babe i could defiantly relate to it too, i know how it feels but that was honestly a beautiful poem and i enjoyed every moment of it |