Comments : Hiding the Truth

  • 18 years ago

    by *BeautifullyBroken*

    5/5...amazing poem babe i could defiantly relate to it too, i know how it feels but that was honestly a beautiful poem and i enjoyed every moment of it
    .:Keke:.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 poem loved it..very deep. loved the rhymes and flow..thnx 4 the comment:)

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    Oh wow. This was very sad. I loved how it flowed, and the Personification was amazing. Great Job, I really liked this one because it might be happening in our world today. You are an excellent story teller!

    (Thanks so much for the comments! I do have a little abstract way in describing my feelings. But, thanks for the prayers! They are well appreciated.)

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This is great! I love it! Good job and very very very sad poem darling!
    xoxo