by LadyPearl May 25, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
**A selection of two poems written by me and my friend Sami (sunset shadows) We each wrote two lines. The first is a general view of darkness and the second is from a person's view. |
This was very good, and I am amazed over the fact the you wrote this with someone! |
by Fallen Angel
This is an absolutely amazing piece of writing. I'll be honest, faced with a particularly long write I'm quite often put off from reading the whole thing and quite often just skip over it...but this really grabbed me, I loved it. The imagery was stunning and despite the interesting writing method it maintained a sense of progression. I can't criticise this write at all. Simply stunning, 5/5 x |
Wow...gr8 work again. u always use fabulous detailing, i dun kno how u do it! gr8 gr8 work...5/5 |
It is Sammy, thank you very much. anyway, I love the poem! lol Very deep, exetera, exetera... don't know what the young authors juges were thinking about downgrading your poem based on topic, cuz it is still good. haha, just kidding. |