by LockedInEternity May 25, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
On day she just decides to think, |
by Polly
I like this, it tells a nice story with a good rhythm to it. I think you could work the layout of it a bit so it is more even, that should improve the flow. Also, I think "to fast" should be "too fast" Take care |
by Megann Lee
Such a true poem, really it is. Everyone should live life to the fullest, never know what could happen.. |
by tayler
WOW THIS POEM IS REALLY GOOD MAN YOU SURE CAN RIGHT I KNOW WHAT YOUR FELING AND THINKING IIN THIS POEM IVE BEEN THERE I GIVE IT A 5 |
Her life would swiftly disappear. |
by nikki
I like this again this is rly awesome ur a very good poet keep up the good work 5/5 |