I acutally liked it. And congrats on winning first. =)

It had a great meaning behind it, And alot of people don't realise that, Or appreiciate it at all. A very nicely written peice. ^_^ 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Nope I think you deserve it. This was a great poem, I would like to see who was up against you, I don't think the had a chance. Great stuff.

Interesting thougt provoking poem ..well written

Hmm its on a topic thats talked about alot at the min. Can tell lots of thought has been put into it and im glad you did not try to make it rhyme.
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Nice job, I hate war seriously. Keep it up