Open Wounds

by LovelyDivine   May 25, 2006


No words can explain how I feel,
I pray my open wounds will heal.
Never thought I'd hear such words,
coming from a lover's mouth.

Listening to these painful words,
my heart begins to hurt.
Ripping, breaking, falling apart,
that's what's happening to my heart.

A hole in my heart is now forming,
the place my love burned for you.
I feel the pain and heartache coming,
Coming from my open wounds.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem, the only thing that I don't like is that you repeated the word "words" two times in the first stanza, it disturbs the flow of it. Anyway, the rest of the poem is greatly written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    That was good
    thanks for entering the comp and ill get back to u asap
    ~EMma

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew

    I did`nt feel it was forced at all it was brilliant as always please keep up the good work love reading your poems. I hope that everything is ok and that you are really not sad. You got me through a very hard time so I know the pain of lost love. Finally getting back on my feet with a new love. Life does go on

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I really liked this....one of the ryhmes was a little forced...but it was still a great piece of work..
    Emma 5/5

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By LovelyDivine