I really liked this....one of the ryhmes was a little forced...but it was still a great piece of work..
Emma 5/5

I did`nt feel it was forced at all it was brilliant as always please keep up the good work love reading your poems. I hope that everything is ok and that you are really not sad. You got me through a very hard time so I know the pain of lost love. Finally getting back on my feet with a new love. Life does go on

That was good
thanks for entering the comp and ill get back to u asap
~EMma

Great poem, the only thing that I don't like is that you repeated the word "words" two times in the first stanza, it disturbs the flow of it. Anyway, the rest of the poem is greatly written.