One Day

This is an ok poem!!!!!!!!

This is a good poem. I felt the same way about my little cousin that lived with us. and I wanted to do the same thing when i turned eighteen I wanted to move out. when you do if you do you will find out that even spending money on toilet paper is going to be hard. They get better as they get older.
~~Good work keep writing.

I know exactly how u feel. my little bro does the same to me. i haev written to poems for him. both sad. but the other day he done something unforgiveable. i wrote a poem on it. he's never going to see the poems i wrte for him either. love ur work.
love willow xxoo

p.s. thanx for the comment. xxoo

Hey sorry about the comment I wrote you. I just hate it when people come and leave mean comments. I could understand if they were trying to make it better but I just thought the "get a life" comment was mean. But thanks for letting me now. And sorry for the comment I left you