Love poems are what i write best, and i like this poem, its so well written and it flows well too, keep writing
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"to showing exact ally how I feel," no space between 'exact ally' should be 'exactly'

This poem sums up fairly neatly a feeling I'm sure people all over the world have felt. I don't know if advice on the subject is applicable, since the subject of the poem could very well be fictional, or non-personal, but I always felt like expressing feelings honestly and completely to people you trust is probably one of the more important things in life.