The day you leave

by Ashlie   May 26, 2006


The day you leave me
Is the day That I'll always miss
I just need to see your smile once
And just to feel your kiss
When I thought you were leaving me for good
My heart ripped apart
Just thinking about my love for you
From now till the very start
You are my best friend
You're the one who drove away my fears
The feeling of you leaving hurts
As I reminisce on our memories my face fills with tears
Before you leave me physically
Know that you'll always be here with me

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  • 18 years ago

    by TaWlIa

    I like this poem. It's very nice. I also feel I am in something somewhat like that. So reading that made me feel good.

    Tie

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Awww, very cute and good poem! i liked it a lot. i understand how you feel on this. keep up the good work, and thanks for commenting on my poem! Love much, Ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by You Dismantle Me

    Woow... that was GREAT!.. heyy.. email me sometime.. its in my profile thingy.. if u click on my name.. it should have a thing for you to click on and email me... later... again.. GREAT poems..

  • 18 years ago

    by She Is Now Gone Away

    Good poem and thanks for the comment everything is fine i guess between me and him. I love this poem you wrote, i understand the pain you felt when you thought he was leaving for good but its diffrent when it actually happens

  • 18 years ago

    by The Tay

    I love this poem...it is really awesome. keep it up girl! love always

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