When will you come

by Jess   May 26, 2006


I'm looking in a river
The fishes swim away
Even they can't bare
To look at me today

I feel someone beside me
But it's just that dream again
Your arm is not around me
Why is it just the same

I sit back down
Upon the grass
Wish time might stop
And life might pass

I wipe my eye
The river's gone
Was just a tear
All gone wrong

I haven't moved
I'm in my room
When will you come
To move this gloom

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    A good one but u should have worked more on it . am trying to say that you could say more to depcit that feeling.i wish u all the best in the future.

    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlie

    This is a very good poem. it describes perfectly how im feeling. i dont know y someone rated it a 3. it deserves a 5!!!!
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aw.. that is really sad and sweet. It sounds like it came straight from the heart. You did a great job on this!

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