by kelS; May 26, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
Whats Saskatoon with out Megan?... |
I like how in the end, you answered a question from the begining. |
by Darien
This was a really good dedication, it's just that, it became a bit repeatitive. Keep writing though. |
Good job 5/5 |
by PygmyPuff
I like it, its good. The form is interesting, youll learn I am all for unique forms of poetry. Theres a few spelling errors. You want to say Bored, not Bord. lol And you put "conner" store, I assume you mean "corner". Besides that its good. {4/5} |
by desigirl
5/5 poem, please check out mine as well, thanks |