by Kerry May 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
It's my decision |
by ForgottenLuv
Great Job again!! your a really good poet who puts alot of emotion and depth into his poetry... so what im tring to say is good write keep it up!! |
Its good, but i get kind of lost.. i think it just needs to flow better.. other than that though it is really good.. it lets out a lot of emotion.. thanks for the comment :) |