Comments : Bleeding wirst

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*so*over*him*~

    Its good, but i get kind of lost.. i think it just needs to flow better.. other than that though it is really good.. it lets out a lot of emotion.. thanks for the comment :)
    *rachel*

  • 18 years ago

    by ForgottenLuv

    Great Job again!! your a really good poet who puts alot of emotion and depth into his poetry... so what im tring to say is good write keep it up!!