Oh my gosh this is really sad and cute but i really love it it's really good!!!! 5/5

Loved this one 2 lol :-) 5/5

ThiS one is gOod tOo..i likE ur pOems they seems toO reAL

Really good job...
i usually dont read poems that don't ryhme but this one kept my attention. really good and heartfelt...i love it. check out my poems I CAN'T, OWEN, AND THE FINALE. I think you might like them. you don't have to comment if you don't want to, but i loved this poem. Great job once again

Tristan

P.S.

It sounds like you went through this...and it makes it real. and if you did, i know almost exactly how you feel...i don't know your circumstances-but getting screwed over still sucks...if you need anyone to talk to I am here.
tris124@msn.com

oh yeah, i loved the taking back sunday best friends quote

;)

Tristan

I can totally understand the things that you were saying in this poem. I love the line when your talking about waking up in there arms
God Bless
Renee

I kno exactly how u feel, its only too real xx

Eh. this as a little.. raw.
i wasnt fond of the lack of rhyme.
but it was raw, and that was a good thing. emotions that are absolutely visible are warming, and you did a good job of that.
one thing i've noticed if you use very short lines.. try to extend them in a poem or two?

5/5

I felt at times this read more like a story than a poem, but nontheless it was still beautiful.
I loved the ending..intense and hardhitting.

I like this poem. I can relate to some of it.
Its good.
5/5
Jadee.

Wow! I really like this poem...I like poems that don't rhyme...I can relate to it somehow with things that have been going on in my life... :D
Leslie 5/5

Ohhhh i really loved itt
i loved the way u ended up the poem
itss sooo sad but yet soo powerful
keep it up gurl;)

5/5

lili

Great poem! i could really relate to what was being said and know exactly how it feels.

5/5