Dad

by Chelsea   May 26, 2006


Are you proud of me?
Please tell me that you are.
Blow after blow,
I've taken your criticism.
I've changed to keep the
name, "your daughter"

I once looked up to you,
The way a little boy looked up to
Superman,
Wishing anything to just be the
man,
Eventually wishing to just meet the
man.

I tried it your way, dad.
I really did.
But in your eyes I'm not good
enough,
And I never will be.

I don't like who you have made
me become.
Take it as that.
I don't want to critique.
I just don't want that.

I love you, Dad.
For whom you are and what you've
done.
Just understand that I'm not you,
And I'm heading down a different
path.

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  • 18 years ago

    by sfiawong

    Your will be proud of you, if you have done something worthy to be admirable by some bodies. Ones behaviour and worhmanship might the only ways of gaining of prouds.