I know that I haven't been writing a whole lot lately, I apologize.

I thought that I could live without poetry it turns out that you can't live without something that you use to release stress.

I really appreciate your continuing support, I do read over all the good and bad comments that people have left me to give me inspiration.

I really liked it and it was really well written

Very well done! i loved it. 5/5

I havent been on here lately because I had lost touch with my more poetic side. I read all of my comments and I liked yours the most. I love this poem so much and from what you say in this poemI can relate all the way.

If you ever need anything I will be here.

Beautiful.

"If everyone is good at something
then I'm good a failure"

Ahh, same here.

A touching read.. The flow of the words and the description of emotion is amazing... Very creative and a personal write...

Nicely written...

I really like this one, however it did lose me in the middle somewhere.

Why is it so hard for me to look good
I'd change, on the outside if I could
the inside too if that needed to be fixed
I would do anything, if you truly insist

^^ my favourite stanza. awesome write. it makes me think of true love, but only from your side, and you are willing to do anything for the other to love you back.

If everyone is good at something
then I'm good a failure

^^ you described what many people would feel at some stage.

but I'm trying to look this all away behind closed door

^^ is look meant to be lock?

overall very good.
5/5

I really like this one, however it did lose me in the middle somewhere.

Why is it so hard for me to look good
I'd change, on the outside if I could
the inside too if that needed to be fixed
I would do anything, if you truly insist

^^ my favourite stanza. awesome write. it makes me think of true love, but only from your side, and you are willing to do anything for the other to love you back.

If everyone is good at something
then I'm good a failure

^^ you described what many people would feel at some stage.

but I'm trying to look this all away behind closed door

^^ is look meant to be lock?

overall very good.
5/5