No, it isn't good..its gr8 actually!
its really amazing Sarah, I admired every stanza and the rhyme was simple also!
I love this one its touched my heart and I can relate to it
Keep it up
Much Luv
NemO x0x0x0x
P.S sorry I hvn't been readin any of ur poems lately, you dun wanna kno wut am passin throu =P

Not good? Who are you KIDDING?? No one else would have ever thought of writing down something like that...its unique and original. Excellent!!

Wow... for just quickly jotting this down... thats very impressive... all of my poems are quick writes tho... becuz mine just come at me so quick i cant write them down fast enough... anyways... i honestly think you could get published :D 5/5/5 -Jen-

Ha. I thought it was wonderful. Quick Jot down or not. This poem is fantastic. I really adore it. The wording, flow and rythym was all there.

This poem is amazing. I read it 5 times and im still not bored with it. I love the images you set forth with your righting.