Nice, this poem even seems to represent what it's talking about in a weird way. It's moved through my head fast, and seemed to end unexpectedly even though I could see the end coming. Battling between false and true, many people will relate to this, if it's constant thoughts or just momments of their life. It may be a little too jumpy, but the jumpiness fits the topic. I'll always love your poetry.

~Purple~

You have an amazing talent and it really shows. I'm in love with your form of writing...tis like nothing I've read ever before. 5/5