My end

by LostForever   May 26, 2006


Shattered dreams,
broken sceams,
dripping blood,
im no good,
take me now,
show me how,
meet my end,
break and bend,
fingers slip,
i've lost my grip,
falling down,
my time to drown,
say goodbye,
but never cry.

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  • 18 years ago

    by G A Darkened

    I wish i could write this well u have a true gift.. dont stop .. u can bring beauty in to this world dont stop ..

  • 18 years ago

    by Maddeline

    How many times per day do you think of ending it all? Do you have anyone supportive in your life at all?

  • 18 years ago

    by cindie

    I like the shortness in your words,this one is my favorite so far:)
    *cindie

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Im not sure if i have read this before lol but its good i think you should have made your lines more longer and put more detail but it was good anyways lol :):) keep smilin girlie xxx alex xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by x-aLeX bAbe-x

    Very short but VERY effective you have good talent show us what you got girl ie xxx alex xxx