Really good!

Mallori

Awesome poem

Very short but VERY effective you have good talent show us what you got girl ie xxx alex xxx

Im not sure if i have read this before lol but its good i think you should have made your lines more longer and put more detail but it was good anyways lol :):) keep smilin girlie xxx alex xxx

I like the shortness in your words,this one is my favorite so far:)
*cindie

How many times per day do you think of ending it all? Do you have anyone supportive in your life at all?

I wish i could write this well u have a true gift.. dont stop .. u can bring beauty in to this world dont stop ..