I disagree with you too, its a brilliant poem
god, baby I ove you so much and I hate to think of you feeling these horrible things, and shane..... well grrrrrrr!
you know you never have to pretend with me, and that I'm here whenever you need me, except the other day when I didn't have credit and yeah!
you're such a beautiful person inside and out and a GREAT poet, I'm proud of you baby
love you now and forever
xxxxxx