"Until my hate was strong enough
to lift me up
and I drank from despairs cup"

LOVE IT! although i can tell this is a poem from the hurt and how hurt you are, I must congratulate u on an awesome poem.
One thing, in the third line..
"love was something I know nothing of"
It's a contrdictory tense u got there.. i think know..should be knew?!
anyway.. great poem.

Im sorry u feel so hurt. Love does that to people. Just try to think of all the good things and time you spent with her.
Always here for you
xoxoxox

"Until my hate was strong enough
to lift me up
and I drank from despairs cup"

LOVE IT! although i can tell this is a poem from the hurt and how hurt you are, I must congratulate u on an awesome poem.
One thing, in the third line..
"love was something I know nothing of"
It's a contrdictory tense u got there.. i think know..should be knew?!
anyway.. great poem.

Im sorry u feel so hurt. Love does that to people. Just try to think of all the good things and time you spent with her.
Always here for you
xoxoxox

WOW codys this is a very strong poem filled with alot of hate and alot of pain i know wat it feels like to have loved and then to have been broken by the one u thought u loved it is hard but u just have to keep strong and think about all the other people who love and care about u just remeber them...
anyways great work :) love it
take care and be safe
xoxo
robyn

Strong, and I can feel the hurt, I know that hurt. It's as if it were my own hun. And the new ryhme scheem of aaa/bbb/ccc is great but, I like consistancy in poetry and the various line lengths are a little distracting, but in places like:

Until my hate was strong enough
to lift me up
and I drank from despairs cup

it works but in the last stanza, with the last line being the longest in the poem, the words fit but the structure is out of place... you know? or is that just nit-picky me? its most likely Just me. But I'm extermly proud of you for going out of your element and growing as a poet =]

Keep it up

And while your gone dont for get to write and remember to pack your toothbrush and undies! lol We'll all miss yeh check in when you can okay?

I LOVE IT! I'm glad a I stumbled onto the RRC board when I did! :) 5/5 and I LOVE your stuff. If you're not already on my faves, I'm putting you there! :)
PV

Wow, full of anger and hatred... I know it's craZy but I LOVE it! I totally know what you're talking about here! I love it! I haven't been on for a while sorry... I got a xanga site...
www.xanga.com/E_Joseph24

Awww thanks for the shout out Hunny! =^_^=

I really love it cody i hope u really dont feel this way about the one u love..or used to love..the one who let u down

This poem has so much emotion in it, cody!! most of the time, ppl bury such strong emotions, but you bring them out into the open. i love it!!
~maggie

Cody that is a good poem from your boy Cameron

Cody that is a good poem from your boy Cameron

Wow, harsh... I'm sorry for what she did to you, that REALLY sucks, but you got a good poem out of it lol

Hey thanks for the comments your right i love your poem and now for some shameless self promotion all you guys who love this poem check out mine its called "why" yeah do that and i'll love you guys forever xox lol Reene