Aw w.o.w That was really good. Buuut. In this line 'and removes from me my life' I think you meant to say 'And removes me from my life' Hm, I dunno. It just didn't sound right the way it was. Awesome job though. Loved it. 5/5

`taleee xx

Wow that is a very strong and emotional poem. You had some great word usage and you described everything very well. The way that you ended it was very good and had a hint of regret in it. Great job on this! Definitely a 5/5**

"Though part of me regrets it
And wishes I could stay,
Thinks of all I now may miss,
But there was no other way.
The river is in a torrent now,
Rushing across the floor,
I take a final glance around the room,
Before using that forbidden door."

thats my favorite stanza, i dont think i have read a cutting poem worded like this, very good. 5/5

Wow this was amazing the flow was great and on point the meaning was deep keep up the good work i hope things get better 5.5

Loved the metaphors. Def. a good touch. It ended rather ubruptly though, but maybe that's the point??

Great job though!!

joy*:.xx