Awww huh i know what it like to feel like this and i wont tell you it gets better it hasnt for me but you speak well of your feelings keep it up 5.5

Aww.. that is so sad.. this really showed your feelings and you let all your emotions out.. it flowed well and was just so sad.. excellent work! 5/5! lotsa lovee!
jessy xox

Hey darling that is a great poem keep on writing

much love,
Marlena

Very sad poem. Yet, Very good. I loved it =D The flow was alright, And the rhyming was okay too. But I did like the message you were sending across. Awesome job!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

"Where we danced our fist dance"
'first' not 'fist'
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"But the magic was used up
Or maybe it was our fault
We stopped filling the love up"
I wouldn't say 'up'/'up' is a rhyme really, so I'd figure out a different word to use.
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"But really our love run short"
the phrase should probably read:
"But really our love that has run short"
but I'd shorten that to:
"But really our love that's run short"
since that would not only help the rhythm, but would be grammatically correct.
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"To “Romeo and Rebecca” by Blink 182"
Loved that line. Such intricate detail and purpose... it not only fulfilled a rhyme but made the entire poem yours, and only yours. This is an original poem, not just a standard one about loss, but a personalized elegy to a place and a love that may no longer exist. I also really liked the last line (as amended slightly by me).

I enjoyed this poem thanks for your comment on my poem "mixed up world" when i wrote that poem i was very confused I am guessing that is what makes it confusing to the reader