by chelyxbaby28 May 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
~~this is sort of a continuation of my other poem ''I'll never give up on you'' its about the same guy. please comment and rate this poem if you read it all, it would me a lot to me.thanks!~~ |
Good poem!! it was sweet but mostly sad. In the last 2 stanzas the flow was lost. But the rhyming was great for the most part and so were the words. |