Thanks 4 your comment hun, this poem was fantastic, def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care sarah x

Great job on this poem. It's really good. The only thing is I would capitalize all the i's and the first letter in each line. But other than that, I loved this poem. It was very emotional and heart felt. Great job on this. 5/5 Keep it up!

Great poem. Gramatical errors are many, but a poem can be great no matter how many misspellings or gramatical errors there are. I love it. Keep up the good writing.
Ash