Enjoyed the mystery to your poem.

I love this one... The mystery is such a grabbing concept in this poem. Your descriptions are beautifully written. Reminds me of being a kid running round exploring anything that was tattered and ruined :) Great job!!!

I loved the opening words. I also liked how you kept with the idea. Very mysterious in deed. Deserves nothing but a 5/5 for sure.

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