Aww.. that is so sweet! i love the idea of a little piece of your heart flying off to find the man you love, that is just so adorable! very passionate write, it contains good metaphors, and great rhymes, and excellent language! nice write! 5/5

Good job, good poem I liked it 5/5
could you check out some of mine. thanx
~*~Tessa~*~

Nice poem..i really enjoyed reading it..but there were a few parts where the flow let off and it was a lil hard to follow..but besides that i loved the theme and the meaning in it..great job..Joc

Thxz 4 the poem comment..i love diz poem gurl itz relly romantic and sad

Brilliant babe. you're a young tallented writer, and i absolutely loved it. keep up the good work! =D

*heidi

Omg i love this poem! good job
lyndsey

OHH MY GOSSHHH! THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL ABOUT ME AND MY BOYFRIEND. I KINDA..DEDICATED IT TO HIM ON YOUR BEHALF. HE ALSO SENT HIS PRAISE!GREAT AWSOME.....