by aaron 1 remo May 26, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
Day in day out, |
This is awesome..it flows so well. I love it. <3=] |
by sanjia
Wow i like this it reminds me of my relationship kinda!! |
Cool write! The rhyming was great with out a doubt! I loved the biginning the most. The end could have been a bit different but it's still a great poem! Keep it up! ~peace out~ ^_^ |
by BeeBeeGun
Awsome poem...you can really see the emotions you have put into this poem |
by Just Wishes
Rage and great anger can speak loduly in this poem. a good try . |