Comments : The final walk

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    I really enjoyed reading this poem.. great work xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow katie!! This was such a powerful poem! Brings up a lot of questions that are still left unanswered.
    "When all life leads to death"
    That line made me sit and think for a while. Awesome poem, I really enjoyed it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    "singing disasterâ??s song " looks like the site messed with it a bit. but loved the poem. definately the second and last stanza. life is about perspective it is what we try and make of it. of course there will be times when everything is out of our hands and things will just have to come out the way they do but for the most part we do control how well we live. great job. sorry i haven't had much time to keep up with your poetry.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Wow katie that was a beautiful poem...i really loved it ...
    Tragedies occur, people hurt and people die
    But is that not why we all have the ability to cry

    what speldid meaningful lines....they really relate to me now...
    nice talkin to ya ...byee for now