by Kaylee
Hey Tie Guy. This actually made me laugh as I used the excuse, "He hates me." a couple of times before and I refused to dissect the grasshopper they wanted us to. The repetition made the poem work. I loved it. |
by Simon Hayes
Great writing... I enjoyed this one. A great rhythm to it. An interesting concept for "school's out". |
by Bobbi
Lol ..i love the last two lines ...so true .......great poem!!! |