by Julienne May 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I look at you |
Well written fast paced poem, some good insight on yourself Well done |
by TracyM
I like this one, its short, but you seem to put everything across in the length of this poem. it really stands out. and with a good flow. |
Great poem.. Kinda short but its ok you got the point across.. Flow was good.. I felt the emotion! good job |
This is good. |
by I Love You
Short, but i like it a lot. it was very well written. |