Looking in a Mirror

by Julienne   May 27, 2006


I look at you
do you know
what do i mean
are you innocent
or are you blind
or do you see
i am confused,
yet it is simple
the games you play
that strike deep
my life's a game
i look into your eyes,
i see cold
only cold and hate
what do you see
when you look in mine
fear, anxiety or qualm?
or just me
only me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well written fast paced poem, some good insight on yourself Well done

    Grant

  • 17 years ago

    by TracyM

    I like this one, its short, but you seem to put everything across in the length of this poem. it really stands out. and with a good flow.

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Great poem.. Kinda short but its ok you got the point across.. Flow was good.. I felt the emotion! good job

  • This is good.
    It flowed well and the emotion was deep.
    Although I think you could expand on it a bit more.
    But its still good. 4/5

    [Sarah]

  • 17 years ago

    by I Love You

    Short, but i like it a lot. it was very well written.