For eternity, I thank you

by Julienne   May 27, 2006


If you could live what I live
A life of scorn and hate every day
Would you see what I see
Or would you feel it your way

I often am lost and alone
Stuck up on a ledge
On a rocky mountain top
Clinging to the edge

I shift my way to safety
But it's always just a little far
Treading carefully and shuffling
Do you know how nasty people are

In a dark back corner,
back against the wall
They push and they laugh
They stand and watch me fall

But you were there to catch me
And for eternity i thank you
As far as friends come
None come quite as far as you....

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I loved this 1!!!...it's very well written!........Excellent!......Kp writnig!

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Out of all the ones I have read that you have written I like this one the most. Beauifully written. Amazing word chice, great flow, I love them emtions in it. Well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TracyM

    I like this one. very nicely written, really made me keep reading.

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    Excelent poem, very well written and excelently phrased, you are a very good writter and i enjoy reading your poems 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    *5/5 excellent poem. i loved how you expressed yourself by the stuck on a ledge and such. it worked perfetly. :) you were really able to bring it out and i loved itttttt!

    friend poems are so cute.. it really shows how much one friend means. excellent job. =]

    -Lith

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