F**K YOU DAD!

by tash   May 27, 2006


I was only 8,
how could you do this to me?
what could i do?
what could i say?
this is not fair.
i thought i was going to be ok.
does this mean its over?
its been 10 years now & I'm finally doing something about it!
you're not going to stop me!
you cant, you're gutless!
you bastard, f**kin ruin my life like that!
how f**kin dare you just waltz into my life & ruin everything in your tracks.
if i could just get my hands on you i would ring your neck until you turned as red as sun down & as blue as the pen id stab into your eyes!!!
F**K YOU DAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this piece of writing is about when my father left my mother when i was 8 years old & it ripped me apart as we were so close & i just cant believe that he would do such a thing! now i hear from him about 3 times a year so its pretty bloody sad if u ask me!!!!!!!!!! please comment on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
ThAnX gUyZ.XoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoX.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    Great poem, I can really relate. My dad left when I was 4 going on 5 and I hardly talk to him anymore because I hate him for leaving and blaming it on me saying I left, but he always abused me anyways, but I still hate him for everything yet love him because he's my dad. but awesome poem, intense feeling came into it and you potrayed that very well

  • 18 years ago

    by claire

    Ur poem is really good i no it's about a sad thing but it really shows how u feel n that's a good thing keep it up m8 lv claire x 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow what a anger i felt it realy flows to your poem it is hard to see your mother crying because of your father you just have to love your mother more than you should be great poem love this