by blueknight
Wow what a anger i felt it realy flows to your poem it is hard to see your mother crying because of your father you just have to love your mother more than you should be great poem love this |
by claire
Ur poem is really good i no it's about a sad thing but it really shows how u feel n that's a good thing keep it up m8 lv claire x 5/5 |
by Nikki
Great poem, I can really relate. My dad left when I was 4 going on 5 and I hardly talk to him anymore because I hate him for leaving and blaming it on me saying I left, but he always abused me anyways, but I still hate him for everything yet love him because he's my dad. but awesome poem, intense feeling came into it and you potrayed that very well |