by Leah20 May 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
His scent still lingers in my room |
by dineshia
Are yall still together? this is a great poem and I love how you did the title in french. Nice touch |
by Jessica
WOW! i loved this! it was amazingg.. the flow and rhythm was perfect.. your choice of words beautiful and the emotion unreplacable.. wonderful job! 5/5 |
by Kara !
No criticism at all. This truely is lovely. |
Beautifully written. I feel the same way about my recent boyfriend, so it hit home pretty well for me. Only real critique I have is to check your "i" to "I" capitalizations because I should always be a capital. :) |
by Krissey
OMG the first stanza was a great way to start if it def. makes the reader want to read more..I love "A hollywood kiss" hehe it made me giggle!! |