Awww.. thats soo sweet! i loved it! brilliant descriptive words, good flow, and lots of emotion! wonderful write! 5/5 there are just a few little funny letters where you copied and pasted ' you might want to change that.. hehe! nice job!

Aww.. that is really sweet. You were very descriptive in this and you really expressed your emotions well. It's filled with so much love and compassion. You had some great word usage and the flow and rhythm of this was really good and it kept my attention. This is really good. I absolutely loved it!

Aww thats really sweet, i love the love you expresss in it great job xxALLYxx

Awwww! That was so sweeeet =P

A very good poem. Flow was good. And it was just beautifuuuul tehe. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

`taleee xx

'Elloha.
This was beautiful!
It's locly to see the happy side to love in a poem instead of heart break.
Well done.
I really enjoyed it and loved your word usage.
x

Amazing! I loved it. It was so beautiful. I liked your use of words. It was so descriptive. The flow was good, but a little off in some places. Other than that I enjoyed it very much. Keep it up!

Beautiful job

OMG the first stanza was a great way to start if it def. makes the reader want to read more..I love "A hollywood kiss" hehe it made me giggle!!

This poem was beautiful and I love your style of writing! Excellent job on this!!!

Beautifully written. I feel the same way about my recent boyfriend, so it hit home pretty well for me. Only real critique I have is to check your "i" to "I" capitalizations because I should always be a capital. :)

No criticism at all. This truely is lovely.

"His scent still lingers in my room
What's left yesterday's consumed"

Those two lines. I completely adore them. ღ
It's a beautiful poem to describe the happiness you feel for having love. Wonderful work. x

WOW! i loved this! it was amazingg.. the flow and rhythm was perfect.. your choice of words beautiful and the emotion unreplacable.. wonderful job! 5/5

Are yall still together? this is a great poem and I love how you did the title in french. Nice touch