Comments : To The Far Edge Of Reality, Undetected

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    As i may lay my head on feather pillows
    I just as well lie down on rocks
    for comfort is only glorious
    when thy mind rests in Sanctuary.

    This poem is very thought provoking. Usually you read a poem and you just take it in. With this I really had to think about what was written.
    I know it's wierd but can you enjoy reading a poem? It felt... different? reading your poem, is what I'm trying {not very well} to say. :)
    Anyways, V. cool and original.

    Lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Hey.
    Thanks.
    Its nice to hear someone say they understand and not say something false and inspirational about something they know nothing about.
    :)
    You helped. xxx