Comments : Shortdance

  • 18 years ago

    by TrueLovesVictim

    Great poem...i can tell you were in much pain when you wrote this and im sorry...but keep writing i enjoyed reading this because i could relate.

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Empty, numb, but never sad
    Pretending it was what I had''-

    I love the beat of those words. Whole poem really, V. cool.

    :) xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by xUnbreakablex

    Awwww i love it well done schteffi *hug* were all here for you xxx