Comments : The Sweetest Thing That Exist

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    FireXfly, Really liked this poem, it went into such depth, yet with such clarity. Its a masterpeice. Thankyou for the comment on mine.
    def. a 5/5
    God Bless
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by Summer

    Whole live for love --
    shouldn't this be life???
    It's an excellent poem. I've been trying for so long to write a love poem, but I dont think its in me so I really respect your talent to write one so beautifully.

  • 18 years ago

    by NotreDameDon287

    Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Rain

    That was very well written and it had great rhyme and rythem. It was well thought out. Great job! I could tell you put alot of heart into it. ~Take care

  • 18 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    This was really good!!! omg i love it and i voted a five but you have some errors in spelling

    *Doing our best to past this loves test
    Because we know in this life we've been blessed

    its pass not past :D

    *Thoughts about what the futher may hold
    Even after everything we have already been told

    its future not further :D

    im not doing this to make you agree or piss you off, you asked so i thought i would help :D

    great peom

  • 18 years ago

    by Christinaღ

    Cute

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    A love so strong not even distance can break
    Love so real it can't even be faked
    Proving that our love is meant to be
    We just wish everyone around us would agree
    ``````````````````````````````````
    Loved that stanza, It was so good. This whole poem was good. I loved it from start to finish, And by the looks of things, Alot of other people love it too. Awesome job. and keepw writing. 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    A sweet poem won't give it less than 5 bcoz it deserves.it's strong and have music .

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Amazing, Ash, Incredibly amazing...:D

    Marielys

  • 18 years ago

    by braydens1mommy

    This poem means alot to me. It's great!!

    LAter

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    Wow, I can see why you have the rating you have for this. Great work....5/5, you deserve it....

  • 17 years ago

    by Pretend--ToLoveMe

    I love how when you write... the words just seem to flow and the story line of the poem is just so great. So many people go through that and it makes it really interesting to read. Good job. ^.^

  • 17 years ago

    by nhat

    5/5 really good....

  • 16 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    Wow. great poem. its very cute. i can relate to it. nice flow and rhymess. 5/5 good jobb!!

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Awww, this is really sweet.
    Wonderfully written,
    Rhyming was good.

    A love so strong not even distance can break
    Love so real it can't even be faked
    Proving that our love is meant to be
    We just wish everyone around us would agree
    My favourite stanza, reallt touching.

    Great Job,
    Keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    This is a very sweet poem,

    im on to read the next half of it!!

    FYI - last line... did you want that to be Sweets
    or sweetest?