She sits in the corner...

by .x.bєαuтιfulÑ” lιє.x.   May 27, 2006


She sits in the corner, tears
falling down her skin,
All the pain she's ever
Felt is drowning her within.

She makes an effort to
Smile, to make you think she's
Fine, but deep inside she's falling
Apart, but you can't see the signs.

The world seems to be against
Her no matter what she tries to
Do, in the end she never really seems To Make it through.

She tries to make you happy, but
In then end you break her heart, you Leave her empty and broken with Everything ripped apart.

She's finally letting it all go, she
Says you can have her heart, cause
She doesn't want it now that you've
Ripped it apart.

::Not one of my best..but I haven't written anything in a long time.

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  • 18 years ago

    by .x.pain&hate.x.

    Hey i really like all your work! every poem of yours i read is really good, ur so talented. i can relate to some of the things you write to,
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    Thanks 4 the advice about my 3 guys yea i have dumped shane i did it last nite now my bro is mad at me (not my bro by blood just a guy who i consider my bro) but he will get ova it. i havent worked it out bout Ally and Michael yet but i hope 2 make a desion soon i dont wont to hurt them i love them both thanks again 4 ur advice. also this is a really sweet poem i think it is really deep good job

  • 18 years ago

    by ღMőŁŀŷ Ĺůvš Ũღ

    Good poem just try to let it flow more naturally. it seemed like you were struggling to ryhme or something like that. keep up hte great work!
    XoOx molly

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Well i think it's amazing you did a lovely job it was very deep and had a lovely flow keep up the amazing work 5.5

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