Well i think it's amazing you did a lovely job it was very deep and had a lovely flow keep up the amazing work 5.5

Good poem just try to let it flow more naturally. it seemed like you were struggling to ryhme or something like that. keep up hte great work!
XoOx molly

Thanks 4 the advice about my 3 guys yea i have dumped shane i did it last nite now my bro is mad at me (not my bro by blood just a guy who i consider my bro) but he will get ova it. i havent worked it out bout Ally and Michael yet but i hope 2 make a desion soon i dont wont to hurt them i love them both thanks again 4 ur advice. also this is a really sweet poem i think it is really deep good job

Hey i really like all your work! every poem of yours i read is really good, ur so talented. i can relate to some of the things you write to,
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