Cute poem very nice job and thanks for you comment and the mess up didnt notice it before lol and it's all fixed : ) 5.5

I REALLY like that! You captured the perfect image of what summer usually is. I love the imagery you created, and the flow is amazing. Brilliant poem.
Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

P.S. I will definately pray for your sister's boyfriend in Iraq!

Very kool, i liked it...so simple yet u know wut the poem is talking about and how much fun and drama goes on...nice....ur a good writer..this was widely relatable....
love ya lots,
sore

Hi, thanks so much for your comment, its great to know that someone was in the same situation. I am in canada, where abouts are you from? Hope you are getting used to the US. It would be great to hear from you again.